At sKids, on Monday, we had a carnival day. the first thing we did was make toffee apples and some people went on the bouncy castle. When we made toffee apples, we got a bowl, sugar, flour, food colouring, cream of tartar, apples and Popsicle sticks. we boiled sugar to 150 degrees. The staff called Kaiya said that the sugar is so hot that i we touch it, we would go to hospital cos it will burn us. i put in the red food colouring.
after we finished, me and my friends went on the bouncy castle. the bouncy castle fell down but i go out before it fell down. then the sKids staff made it come back up. then it fell down again. then it came up, and the staff said, only 5 people at a time. later we covered our toffee apples with the sugar and then made chocolate fudge and Russian fudge. when i was mixing the Russian fudge, it started burning so one of the staff turned it down.
then we played games. the first game was popping a balloon with a dart. there was about seven balloons, and i popped one!! there was enough prizes for everyone but not the balloon one. we played another game where you had to get a ball in a cup i got that too. the last game was getting a pool ring on a bottle that was the last game and i won that too.
Good job! with your work! all you need to do to make it better is you should tell us who your friends are.. and you might need to prof read it because i can see plenty of errors other then that you have done a good job!:3
ReplyDeleteHi Charlotte!
ReplyDeleteYour writing is pretty good.
You have some "I's" that need fixing up because you did "i" instead.
You need to also fix sKids, other than that you did great!