The Storm The storm is a raging elephant It is as dangerous as a pack of wolves it moves fast like a spreading forest fire flames it Is as hard and as grey as the concrete on the street Trumpeting through the forest as they bowl over trees in their stampede Ripping trees down like a raging rhino Stamping all over buildings Nobody will survive looking at this creature Stamping crashing raging Wild furious.
Thursday 30 July 2020
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Hey Charlotte! What wonderful and rare words you used, making it sound fantastic! All the sentences don't have full stops, so maybe you should go back and correct it. Also, I can't see why you write "The storm" Twice. But, It was great!
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