♥️ Unexpected adventure. ♥️
Once upon a time there was a girl named lily. She woke up one morning to brush her teeth and have a bath, but when she got in the bath… SHE WAS IN THE OCEAN!!!
She was terrified but she was kind of exited too.
She wished she could take a photo but she didn't take her phone in the bath. Lily saw a turtle coming closer and closer. She was a little bit scared but then the turtle said “Hello! Whats your name?” lily replied back “h-hi! Im lily” the turtle said “thats a cool name!” “thanks” said lily. After that they had so much fun they pretended that they were sailing in a boat and the splashed the water into the boat. They stayed ther for about 3 hours. Then lily fell asleep. When she woke up, she was in her bed! She thought to herself, “it must’ve been just a dream!” The End
Hi Charlotte its me Lilley I just wanted to say its really good but you need to make the story smaller seeing its going off the side and you can't read it. Its great other then that
ReplyDeleteoh ok thank you i will change that :)
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